Research says more and more business training and business meeting are taking place online. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The
internet
has brought unprecedented
convenience
for human beings.
Such
convenience
was a blessing during the COVID-19 period, during which thousands of
meetings
and business were conducted online.
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time
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, many companies still prefer delivering services to customers and training
employees
online.
However
, the benefits of the
technology
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up to a point, its
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and downsides may overshine the advantages
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it. Starting with the positive sides of online
meetings
and training, one advantage without much thought invested can be stated is that the
internet
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overcomes the physical barrier for all stakeholders. No matter where people are located, like Los Angeles or Sydney, the
internet
connects them without much effort. Online calls are especially crucial if the issues are urgent.
For instance
, if the CEO is on a business trip, but a high-net-worth client approaches him for certain advice urgently. They can hold
meetings
online, which not only solves the problems
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but retains the company's customers.
In addition
, online training saves
time
for both managers and
employees
. Commuting
time
is saved, combined with the flexibility to choose the
time
slots suitable for both parties. Online training and
meetings
are welcomed by
employees
for their
convenience
and flexibility. Having said the
convenience
that is
brought by the
internet
, its limitations in terms of difficulty to supervise the
employees
and slight likelihood to substitute onsite working limit the
internet
as only a tool to use.
Firstly
, employers cannot be sure what their trainers were doing after the cameras. The cameras normally show the heads of attendees. With these very limited sights, some can take advantage of playing on their phones stealthily.
Hence
, the efficiency of the training will not be ensured,
while
time
and money are being invested by companies.
Moreover
, when having
meetings
with clients or managers, no one can perfectly be sure about the signal qualities. Sometimes,
meetings
can
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out. It takes
time
to reconnect to the apps and sometimes can cause clients’ impatience and
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.
Furthermore
, some training, like carpenter apprenticeship, will require trainers to be physically present. Trainings that require manual work and multi-party coordination can be conducted more efficiently offline, which
further
proves that
technology
cannot free people from physically being in the companies. In conclusion, the phenomenon of
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and training does not guarantee the perfection of
such
technology
. Employers' concerns about
employees
' slack and
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onsite training outweigh
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of the
technology
, making its use considered
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efficient in some cases only. Given that these problems cannot be solved immediately, my stance is that
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overshine the advantages.
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Work on providing more specific examples to strengthen your argument. For instance, instead of saying 'online training saves time...' you could provide data or a study that supports this point.
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Clarify your main ideas and ensure each paragraph addresses only one main point to enhance comprehension.
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Develop each paragraph more thoroughly to strengthen logical progression and clarity.
coherence cohesion
You have effectively introduced the topic and provided a clear stance in your conclusion, demonstrating good understanding of the essay's structure.
task achievement
You present a balanced perspective by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of online meetings and training.

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