Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of planets and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In every country on the
earth
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, there is disagreement around the topic of environmental issues. With regard to
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topic, few consider that the extinction of specific
species
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of
animals
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and plants are
almarming
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alarming
environmental problem,
while
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others opine that other
envrionmental
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environmental
problems are more pressing. In
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esssay
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essay
, I will discuss both
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and provide my opinion.
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with,there is no doubt all the
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animals
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animal
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and
plants
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species
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are substantial. Primarily, all the
species
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are connected to each other and play an improbable role in each other lifespans.
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, the food chain is totally
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upon all the
species
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.
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, a recent survey conducted by Time News of India indicates that if the number of
harbivours
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herbivores
harbours
animals
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increased
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and carnivours
decrease
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decreases
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it will
effect
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affect
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the environment in numerous ways. On the
controry
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contrary
, Undoubtedly, other
environment
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environmental
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issues are
an
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apply
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urgent
issue
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issues
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. First and foremost,
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warning is one of the biggest
concern
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concerns
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these days. Because of
glabal
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global
warning
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warming
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the earth
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earth
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earth's
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temperature is
rised
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raised
rising
day by day and
sea
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the sea
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level is
increased
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which effect all the life on
earth
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. Many
species
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can not
toleret
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tolerate
high
temperature
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temperatures
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and
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consequently
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many
species
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are vanishing from
other
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others
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.
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, an article written by The University of New York reflects that the
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earth
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earth's
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temperature is rising by 2% each year which is an urgent issue. In a nutshell,
according to
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my understanding extinction of particular
species
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of plants and
animals
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are
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interconnected with other environmental issues.
Hencoforth
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Henceforth
, if
human
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humans
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try
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to protect the environment,
nevertheless
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, the
extionction
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extinction
of
species
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will be prevented.

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coherence cohesion
Improve paragraph coherence by ensuring that ideas flow logically from one to the next. Use more linking words and phrases to guide the reader.
task achievement
Provide more relevant and specific examples to support the main points in your essay.
task achievement
Try to refine your grammar and spelling to improve clarity and readability, focusing on common errors such as "glabal" to "global," and "toleret" to "tolerate."
coherence cohesion
The essay successfully introduces both perspectives on the issue and includes a conclusion which summarizes the writer's opinion.
task achievement
There is a clear effort to discuss both views and provide a balanced perspective.
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