You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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There is no denying the fact that changing or being the same is a crucial reason for your growth and could identify your lifestyle.

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it is a commonly held belief that some individuals prefer spending their time doing the same activities or commitments. There is

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an argument that changing and improving is always beneficial.

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essay will analyze

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topic from both points of view and express my opinion. On

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hand, if people do the same thing that could make their routine

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without any complexities.

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, there is no necessity to learn new activities or beneficial skills.

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, spending your life without any improvements or discovering some useful information

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means you live in your comfort zone.

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, research in Japan shows that people who live in their comfort zone are probably able to be unproductive and feel anxious

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most of the time.

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, people who accept change are probably more able to learn and gain experience but with a high risk. It is

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possible to say that there is no concept for learning and enhancing the life system except

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positive change.

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, doing new activities and methods may give you a free experience and learn from your mistakes which is a significant benefit for your growth.

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, from the beginning I was afraid to learn the English language

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, now I can communicate easily and am able to achieve an IELTS certificate because I accepted the change risk. In conclusion, There are no easy answers to

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question. On balance,

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, I tend to believe that accepting changes could lead you to discover new important things

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learning

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modern concepts and getting significant experience.

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, we should respect the other side and do not criticise them.

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coherence cohesion

Try to enhance the logical flow of ideas by linking sentences and paragraphs more effectively. This will improve the overall coherence of your essay and make your arguments easier to follow.

task achievement

Although you have addressed both views, consider providing more specific examples and detailed analysis to fully support your arguments. This will strengthen your task achievement score.

task achievement

Your ideas are generally clear, but ensure every point is comprehensively explained, particularly the benefits of accepting change. This will provide more depth to your essay.

coherence cohesion

You have clearly presented an introduction and conclusion, creating a logical structure to your essay and introducing the main ideas.

task achievement

The essay effectively addresses both sides of the argument, showing a balanced consideration of the topic.

task achievement

By using personal experience as an example, you've effectively illustrated one of the benefits of accepting change.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

305 words

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stability
routine
comfort
familiarity
fear
unknown
resistance
negative consequences
security
adaptability
growth
development
excitement
experiences
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resilience
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