The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018

The line graph points out the

amount

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number

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of shops that

are drop

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dropped

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out and the sum of new shops

opened

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that opened

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during

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between

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the years

of

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apply

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2011 and 2018. As easily

see

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seen

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that

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apply

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both closures and openings are high over the period,

downward

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a downward

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tendency

is

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apply

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happened for the openings, parallel to that closures

has

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apply

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showed a downfall when looking at only

that

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the

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start and end of the given point. Within one year, there is a rapid decrease occur for newly set up businesses from around 8500 to 4000. It moved upward to 6000 until 2014

,

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but quickly declined to 4000 for

next

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the next

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year, and

remain

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remained

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unchanged for 2 years

and

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apply

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a slow contraction

occured

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occurred

by 3000

at the end

of 2018. Meantime, closures began with just over 6000

in2011

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in 2011

and

slight

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slightly

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changed to 6000 in 2012. It

steady

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steadily

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changed over 7000 in 2013 and turned back similar to the beginning. There was a quick slide

happened

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that happened

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to less than 1000 in 2015 and immediately increased back to around 5100. It

then

kept constant over the remainder of the periods.