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The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates data about employment and
education
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 for eight states in Europe in 2015. Generally speaking, Norway has the best statistics with the most
people
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 at work and having a degree from a university (74.8% and 43.2% respectively).
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, citizens in
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 country have the largest average payments, hitting 41483 euros. Austria and the UK have huge proportions of
people
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 who have work and a noticeable amount of money they earn,
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 Austria contains far fewer
people
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 with a third
education
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 (41.6% compared to 30.6%). Luxembourg, despite its size, has a great proportion of residents who both have jobs and educations in universities/colleges.
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, only half of Greek
people
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 are employed and one-third have a college/university
education
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. Bulgaria features a similar pattern, with a modest number of residents employed and the smallest incomes (3332 euros).
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, less than 30% of humans in Portugal have higher
education
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 (22.9%).

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words education, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rate
  • education level
  • percentage
  • statistics
  • comparison
  • correlation
  • trend
  • pattern
  • outlier
  • figure
  • summarize
  • highlight
  • report
  • significant
  • relevant
  • overview
  • analyse
  • data
  • implication
  • demographic
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