Learning a foreign language offers an insight into how people from other cultures think and see the world. The teaching of foreign language should be compulsory at all primary school. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

One of the most pressing issues in modern society is learning a foreign
language
which is
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important of our studies agent. It has been suggested that the number of foreign
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which is teaching compulsory at all primary
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. To my mind, I think
this
is a partially positive trend and other cultures think and see the world. From an
overall
perspective, there are two main reasons why people believe that foreign
language
should be compulsory.
Firstly
,
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foreign
language
is
an
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important for every person because it is an international
language
such
as English,
Spanis
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Spanish
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and
native
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language
.
Secondly
, Every school has permitted to
forign
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foreign
language
should be necessary at all primary
school
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. A good illustration of
this
is that every
students
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student
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do
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learn
foreign
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language
and
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they will not suffer
to
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other countries. It
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not only
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to
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students but
also
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to
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countries.
On the other hand
, there are several
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against foreign
language
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A
further
argument for
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of
cultural
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culture
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and
see
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seeing
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the world.
For
example
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A
students
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is teaching
foreign
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a foreign
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language
who
is know
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their
like
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education system,
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cultural
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culture
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.
activites
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activities
,
countries
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countries'
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information, and so on.
As a result
, a learner will go to overseas who is not
problem
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foreign
language
. If a student learning
foreign
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language
, he will not face any
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like, like he
speak
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fuleantly
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fluently
. In conclusion, foreign
language
is an issue which will continue to demand our attention
for
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the
significant
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future.
However
, I feel that the best way to
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this
issue is by learning
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foreing
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foreign
language
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languages
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. If the authorities
this
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policy, it will provide a better life for future
generation
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generations
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.
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Provide a more comprehensive and nuanced response to the statement. Consider discussing potential downsides or challenges to compulsory foreign language education.
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The essay demonstrates awareness of the broader benefits of learning a foreign language, such as cultural understanding and enhanced international communication.

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