It has been suggested that cars and public transport should be banned from city centers and only bicycles be allowed instead To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many assume that it would be nice if any public transport was cancelled by
government
and that using Correct article usage
the government
bicycle
could be more practical. Correct article usage
a bicycle
This
essay is disagree
with Change the verb form
disagrees
idea
about Add an article
an idea
the idea
bicycle
championship
.
Fix the agreement mistake
championships
Allowed
Wrong verb form
Allowing
bicycle
as Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
main
and only transport will complicate Correct article usage
the main
citizen’s
lives because Fix the agreement mistake
citizens’
this
mode of transportation
not Add a verb
transportation is
transportation was
much
comfortable Rephrase
very
like
our basic cars, buses, metro Change preposition
as
and
etc. Bicycles are not adapted Correct word choice
apply
for
Change preposition
to
the
bad season conditions Correct article usage
apply
as
rainy or snowy weather. Correct quantifier usage
such as
For example
, in winter or autumn
you just can’t able to ride Add a comma
autumn,
bike
and Add an article
a bike
the bike
main
cause is Correct article usage
the main
low
temperature which can cause illness and something more serious related Add an article
the low
a low
with
your health.
Another reason why Change preposition
to
bicycle
is not Add an article
the bicycle
a bicycle
good
way of Add an article
a good
traveling
is the infrastructure problem of our country. Because of uncomfortable conditions like Change the spelling
travelling
absence
of bike paths, Add an article
the absence
an absence
this
can cause a lot pf
problems. Correct your spelling
of
For example
, the huge highway just can’t be maintained by cyclists because it’s too dangerous for their life
. Fix the agreement mistake
lives
It’s
can Unnecessary verb
It
also
contribute to road accidents. So, be more careful.
In conclusion, bicycle
can be used Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
as entertaining
traffic but not as Change preposition
to entertain
serious
way of movement and Correct article usage
a serious
general
direction of transportation is more familiar and comfortable.Correct article usage
the general
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