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Writing Samples
Band 3.5

Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper?

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Yes, in my
opinion
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 truth should be
objectives
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objective
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 when it comes to
news
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. With the advent of technology, one can access information
anyhwere
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anywhere
, anytime and anyhow without looking at a
newspaper
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.
Newspaper
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 is a platform to access information
especially
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 burning issues in our society. Ethically, the reporters or
journalist
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journalists
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 are only limited to the 5W's and H (Where, Who, Whom, What and How). The 5W's and
H
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 are the conventional way
or
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of
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 reporting
news
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 stories in
the
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society and the style of reporting is
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a structure
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structure
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 or usually affected by the policies, vision or what the
Newspaper
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 organization stands for and
some times
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sometimes
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,
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 is
being
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effected
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affected
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 by the Editorial Board or
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Committee
.
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, the Sun
Newpaper
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Newspaper
 in Nigeria is owned by our President Tinubu. The reporting
sytle
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style
 in
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 organization will be different
compare
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 to
another
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Newspaper
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organization
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organizations
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. In
this
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 case, the Sun
Newpaper
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Newspaper
 will be subjective in
their
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its
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 reporting. The function of a
newpaper
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newspaper
new paper
 is to disseminate information to the public, from politics, entertainment, sports, etc. With the help of social media and technology, everyone is a journalist. He/she wants to be the first to break the
news
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 across all the social media
platform
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platforms
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 and
this
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 has its
advantage
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advantages
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 and disadvantages one of the disadvantages is that the
news
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are
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 not verified, which could raise different opinions and
sensation
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sensations
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 on
the
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social media platform,
this
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 can
also
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 shapen other people opinion and
been
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 objective in judgement. Not all
news
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 is true especially when they are not verified.

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Task Achievement
Ensure that your introduction clearly outlines your main points. Consider including a thesis statement that summarizes your overall argument or perspective about news and truth.
Coherence and Cohesion
Improve the logical flow between paragraphs and ideas. Use clear linking words to guide the reader through your points, making the structure more cohesive.
Task Achievement
Elaborate on your points with more specific examples or details, particularly when discussing the subjective nature of news reporting and its effects on public opinion.
Task Achievement
You provide a thoughtful perspective on the influence of social media and technology on news reporting, which is relevant to the topic.
Task Achievement
The recognition of the ethical responsibilities of journalists is a strong point in your essay, demonstrating an understanding of media integrity.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • objective reporting
  • subjective interpretation
  • media bias
  • misinformation
  • journalistic integrity
  • editorial standards
  • fact-checking
  • watchdog role
  • public opinion
  • newsworthy
  • ethical journalism
  • credible sources
  • press freedom
  • sensationalism
  • media literacy
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