The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
The bar chart gives data on the production of wind energy in several countries from 1985 to 2000.
Overall
, the United States produced the most wind energy over the given period except in the final stage , when Denmark produced the most. Germany, Denmark and India witnessed steady increases over the years.
In terms of the United States, energy production stood at 1200 Linking Words
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and peaked in 1990 with just over 1600 Use synonyms
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while
falling by
50 to 100 in the final stages.
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, in Denmark harnessing power was just 200 Linking Words
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in 1985. Use synonyms
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, they rose almost eight-fold over the years. Linking Words
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in the final year exceeded a peak with about 1600 Linking Words
megawatts
. India in the given period, Use synonyms
also
saw an increase in power generation starting at 200 and ending at 1200 Linking Words
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By contrast
,Germany saw a much lower growth rate and only doubled over the period to reach just over 600 Linking Words
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.Use synonyms
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