You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The diagram illustrates how a mixture of organic materials
that's
used to improve soil and fertilize plants and the process of how Change the verb form
that are
garbages
made the compost over time Correct subject-verb agreement
garbage
then
made the garden.
Correct word choice
and then
Overall
, starting with piercing the plastic pot for air ventilation, then
, putting waste, grass, newspaper, and food into it that's how the compost processed
.
Add a missing verb
is processed
Firstly
, making
6 tiny wholes through the 2 cubic meters plastic container for better Wrong verb form
make
air flow
. In Correct your spelling
airflow
second
stage, 15cm of three layers were made with newspaper, grass, and food Change the article
the second
also
a little
amount of waste Correct word choice
small
poured
into it.
Add a missing verb
was poured
Moreover
, In third
stage, nitrogen, and hot water were poured into the pot, Add an article
the third
thereafter
, in the
stage number four, Correct article usage
apply
that
the plastic container opening was covered with paper and the heat vaporized through pierced Correct word choice
apply
wholes
. Correct your spelling
holes
Therefore
, after 6 months later the container became garden
and throughout the months, that mixture of organic waste produced garden fertilizer (compost)Correct article usage
a garden
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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