You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The diagram illustrates how a mixture of organic materials
that's
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that are
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used to improve soil and fertilize plants and the process of how
garbages
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garbage
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made the compost over time
then
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and then
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made the garden.
Overall
, starting with piercing the plastic pot for air ventilation,
then
, putting waste, grass, newspaper, and food into it that's how the compost
processed
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is processed
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.
Firstly
,
making
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6 tiny wholes through the 2 cubic meters plastic container for better
air flow
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airflow
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. In
second
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the second
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stage, 15cm of three layers were made with newspaper, grass, and food
also
a
little
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small
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amount of waste
poured
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was poured
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into it.
Moreover
, In
third
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the third
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stage, nitrogen, and hot water were poured into the pot,
thereafter
, in
the
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apply
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stage number four,
that
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apply
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the plastic container opening was covered with paper and the heat vaporized through pierced
wholes
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holes
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.
Therefore
, after 6 months later the container became
garden
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a garden
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and throughout the months, that mixture of organic waste produced garden fertilizer (compost)
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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