The pie chart shows average monthly student expenditure in the UK in 2016. The bar chart shows sources of student income in the same year.
The diagrams illustrate how much money was spent by
students
in the UK in different sectors, as well as
the sources of their income
.
Overall
, most of the students
have more than one source of income
with Student loan
, family and part-time Fix the agreement mistake
loans
job
being used by more than 50% of them. Rent was a category where Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
this
group spent more than half of their total monthly income
.
The Rent was the most expensive spender for this
social group with 385. In comparison to it, the young people didn't spend that much on travel, socialising and bills. These numbers are 52, 64, 69
respectively. Correct word choice
and 69
Amount
of money spent on food is double (about 124). Other Correct article usage
The amount
spendings
Fix the agreement mistake
spending
were
about 91.
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Number
one source of Correct article usage
The number
income
was Student
loan with 80%. Family and part-time jobs placed 2nd and 3rd respectively with around 65%. Less than half of all Correct article usage
a Student
students
used savings and bank overdraft
. Grants and fundings Fix the agreement mistake
overdrafts
was
used only by around 40% of Change the verb form
were
students
, which was the lowest number on the chart.Submitted by isakov.iv1 on
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