The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

This
pie chart depicts the steady of
two
dinners nutritional.
Overall
, all the consistency between the recipes is in a contradiction situation except glucose
are
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nearly the same, measured as proportions.
Additionally
, the most used element in medium baked potato is (carbohydrate) with 35%
while
, the least have 10% of usage known as saturated fat.
On the other hand
, the macaroni recipes have
carbohydrate
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carbohydrates
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at 52% with the most nutritional items
whereas
, other nutrients have the least
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5%.
In addition
, glucose, and protein have been the balanced nutrients used in the
two
recipes 15% and 25% in medium baked potato respectively, and 11% for the
two
kinds of food. Meanwhile, other nutrients in the medium baked potato are similar to glucose. In conclusion, the
two
kinds of food have a similar recipe which is rare in the contemporary period.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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