The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.
This
pie chart depicts the steady of two
dinners nutritional. Overall
, all the consistency between the recipes is in a contradiction situation except glucose are
nearly the same, measured as proportions.
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Additionally
, the most used element in medium baked potato is (carbohydrate) with 35% while
, the least have 10% of usage known as saturated fat. On the other hand
, the macaroni recipes have carbohydrate
at 52% with the most nutritional items Fix the agreement mistake
carbohydrates
whereas
, other nutrients have the least with
5%.
Change preposition
at
In addition
, glucose, and protein have been the balanced nutrients used in the two
recipes 15% and 25% in medium baked potato respectively, and 11% for the two
kinds of food. Meanwhile, other nutrients in the medium baked potato are similar to glucose.
In conclusion, the two
kinds of food have a similar recipe which is rare in the contemporary period.Submitted by bajahzar90 on
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