The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make companies where relevant.
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The bar graphs depict the major intentions among various- ages scholars to study,
moreover
, illustrate the assistance they obtained from their authorities.
On the whole, it is undoubtedly noticed that there are multitudinous fluctuations varied by age
in the reason-to-study category. On the contrary
, the employer-support columns mainly remained plateau even though the data is still primarily based on age
groups.
Breaking down in detail, the blue bar, below 26 years old, has the highest number in studying to pursue a job, 80. Progressively, as older people get, the reason for gaining academic knowledge is to work less initially
. At
the beginning, the new-grown adults started at the number 80, Change the preposition
In
nevertheless
, it witnessed a sharp collapse, resulting in only roughly 20 left. Conversely
, the ones who study due to
interest are much less when they are under 26. However
, the data starts escalating as the age
goes up. When people are over 49, the peak among all the age
categories, 70 of them satisfy their curiosity in their interests by learning.Submitted by truongmaihanh016 on
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