Task one the two pie charts show the patron of expenditure in US between 1966-1996. Summarise the information by selecting the reporting and main feature and making comparisons where relevant

Task one the two pie charts show the patron of expenditure in US between 1966-1996. Summarise the information by selecting the reporting and main feature and making comparisons where relevant
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The given bar charts compare data about the percentage of money that people in the USA spent on various items at two points in time namely, 1966 and 1996.
Overall
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, it was important that the fraction of all elements other than
Food
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, petrol, and furniture increased;
moreover
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, for the second time car was replaced by
food
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for the main section. The graphs demonstrate that
Food
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, the most crucial section that needed a lot of money in 1966, hit 44%;
then
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its figure 30% reduced in 1996. The next one in 1966 was
Food
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, touching 23%;
furthermore
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, it climbed and reached 45% in 1996. The furniture and petrol respectively reported 10 and 9 per cent; they declined and in 1996 they recorded the same portion at 8%.
According to
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the diagram, in 1996, the
restaurants
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number of restaurants
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, which hit 7% in 1966, was absolutely equal to
food
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's proportion:
in contrast
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, Books reduced from 6% to roughly zero in 1996.
However
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, Computers from 1% rose to one-tenth.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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