Prevention is better than cure. Research and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?

It is true that

prevention

is better than cure, as the cost and time for treatments could be tremendous. I would agree to a large extent that the investment in

prevention

is better. Preventative measures

provides

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people a strong immunity, decreasing the potential of getting illness, which could be hard to deal with. It is often encouraged by doctors that the

prevention

of disease is important to keep a healthy

immunity

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system.

For example

, people are persuaded to do

excercises

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exercises

exercise

at least three times a week,

drinking

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adequate

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amount of water and

keeping

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a

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sufficient sleep in order to maintain a healthy condition. All of these

advices

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devices

aim to keep

human

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away from the harm of diseases and

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medicines. As for the medication

of

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cure, it has some chemical substances inside, which could be detrimental

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our bodies.

As a result

,

prevention

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of health should be prioritized over

the diseases treatment

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the treatment of the disease

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. At the same time, healing treatment could be

a

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exorbitant expense for

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society, as it requires delicate

researches

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and countless experiments to ensure its safety. During the Covid period, every country dedicated a significant amount of money and

energe

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energy

into

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pandamic

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pandemic

treatments.

However

, it took almost three years to

finally

dominate the degradation of

this

virus.

Therefore

, if the spread of

this

virus could be controlled and be alerted to the public

eariler

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earlier

, things would become

this

severe.

On the other hand

, some individuals are susceptible to certain illnesses.

Thus

, the

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of

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treatments can't be completely overlooked in order to serve some groups of people who are in need. In conclusion, I agree

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the notion of

prioritzing

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prioritising

prevention

over treatment, as it

cause

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no harm to our health and at the same time

save

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money for

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society.

Nonetheless

, we can not neglect the

need

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of certain patients owing to their distinctive body conditions.

Overall

, both cure and

prevention

are important, but the

later

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one is the key

leading

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to a healthy life.