The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Consumer Spending on Travel (US $ Billion)

The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Consumer Spending on Travel (US $ Billion)
As we can see
that
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the chart gives us
the
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breif
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brief
idea about the Top Ten
Countries
with the highest spending on
travel
in
year
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2014. China is on the top of the
list
with the highest consumer spending on
travel
and Taiwan is seen least spending on
Travel
. We have 10
countries
with us let's understand in detail which country spends the most and which spends the least. As we can clearly see
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China comes on top of the
list
with the highest consumer spending on
travel
, As we can see china
had
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spent almost 105
Billion
US
Dollars
in
year
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2014. Coming to number 2nd which is
United
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States is seen
almost
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spent almost 81 to 85
Billion
US
Dollars
. We can see another Country very similar to
United
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States in the spent amount which is
also
similar to the figure of 81 to 83
Billion
US
Dollars
. The United States and Germany both are similar in their statistics for consumer spending on
travel
. Coming to 4th on the
list
which is the United Kingdom we can see a very huge difference in
the
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spending as compared to before 4
countries
. United Kingdom has spent less than 60
Billion
US
Dollars
in
year
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2014. Singapore comes in the 5th
place
of the
list
with a very huge difference again as compared to
United
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Kingdom with almost a huge amount of difference. Singapore has spent around 23 to 25
Billion
US
Dollars
. 6th
place
comes South Korea and 7th
place
comes Hong Kong with
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similar amount of 20
Billion
US
Dollars
in their
Travel
spending. 8th
place
comes India with spending nearly 12 to 15
Billion
US
Dollars
. 9th
place
comes Malaysia with
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spending of almost 8 to 12
Billion
US
Dollars
.
Last
with the least spending comes Taiwan with almost 10
Billion
US
Dollars
. As we can see
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the top 4
countries
on the
list
spend
the
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more
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as compared to the rest of the
countries
, maybe
its
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it is
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because people in the top 4
countries
prefer to
travel
by
the
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car which has a high cost
for
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transportation because of their expensive fuel
consumptions
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consumption
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. Rest
countries
people may prefer the cheap mode of transportation which includes Train, Buses, walking etc.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, travel, list, billion, dollars, place with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 6 times.
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