The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Consumer Spending on Travel (US $ Billion)
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with the highest spending on travel
in year
2014. China is on the top of the Change the article
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with the highest consumer spending on travel
and Taiwan is seen least spending on Travel
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China comes on top of the Correct word choice
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with the highest consumer spending on travel
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2014. Coming to number 2nd which is Change the article
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similar to the figure of 81 to 83 Billion
US Dollars
. The United States and Germany both are similar in their statistics for consumer spending on travel
. Coming to 4th on the list
which is the United Kingdom we can see a very huge difference in the
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countries
. United Kingdom has spent less than 60 Billion
US Dollars
in year
2014. Singapore comes in the 5th Change the article
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with a very huge difference again as compared to United
Kingdom with almost a huge amount of difference. Singapore has spent around 23 to 25 Correct article usage
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. 6th place
comes South Korea and 7th place
comes Hong Kong with the
similar amount of 20 Correct article usage
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US Dollars
in their Travel
spending. 8th place
comes India with spending nearly 12 to 15 Billion
US Dollars
. 9th place
comes Malaysia with the
spending of almost 8 to 12 Correct article usage
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Billion
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. Last
with the least spending comes Taiwan with almost 10 Billion
US Dollars
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people may prefer the cheap mode of transportation which includes Train, Buses, walking etc.Submitted by shethmihir07 on
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