the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the number of
tourists
travelling to the Caribbean Islands and different accommodation choices between 2010 and 2017.
The total number of tourists
has gradually increased over the past seven years. Visitors who would like to stay on cruise ships have experienced significant growth from 2012 to 2017. However
, visitors who chose to stay on the island have been floating on 1.5 million people from 2012 to 2017.
To analyse the relationship between two accommodation choices and the total amount of tourists
. In 2012, the total population
started to markedly increase until 2015, from 1.5 to 2.75 million people. Besides
, the travellers who stay on cruise ships show the same slope as the total population
. The population
of tourists
staying on the Island remained the same. Until the years 2015 and 2016, the number of visitors who stayed on ships transcended people staying on the island when it was decreasing in the meanwhile. Hence
, The total population
remain the same.Submitted by l2334993624 on
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