The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane, summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons were relevant.

The provided diagram illustrates the process of production of making

sugar

from

sugarcane

.

Overall

,

sugarcane

is produced for a year up to half a year, going

throughout

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7 processes, at the final stage it is dried and cooled,

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and finally

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finally

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finally,

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sugar

is manufactured and it cycles.

Firstly

,

sugarcane

is cultivated between 12 and 18 months. After growing up,

sugarcane

is harvested either truck comes and collects it or workers do it by hand. In the third process, a machine is made up so that it oppresses that and generates juice.

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the fourth stage,

juice

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the juice

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is purified with the help of

limestone

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a limestone

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filter.

Then

, juice is brought to evaporate in order to switch to syrup.

However

, there are still

sugar

crystals in

syrup

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the syrup

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, so

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a centrifuge

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is used to separate crystals from

syrup

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the syrup

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.Eventually, as soon as it is dried up and cooled,

sugar

is produced and the cycle starts again.