The graph below give in formation about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040

The graph below give in formation about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
The given line chart illustrates how many people were living in urban areas in four different Asian countries between 1970 and 2020, with forecasts for the next 20
years
.
Overall
, all four countries witnessed an upward trend over time, and they are expected to continue to grow in future.
To begin
with, the number of inhabitants living in Malaysia and Indonesia was 30% and over 10% respectively in 1970. Both of these percentages sharply increased over 50
years
and
got
Verb problem
reached
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75% and 50%
accordingly
. It is assumed that Malaysia will exceed 80% and Indonesia will approach 60%.
Moreover
, the Philippines started above 30% and reached 45% with some fluctuations until 2020. It is anticipated that it will rise slowly by 2040.
In addition
, Thailand slightly went up from under 20% to 30% over the first 20
years
and stayed steady for the next 30
years
.
According to
predictions, it will observe growth and will surpass 45% by 2040.
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