You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter • offer to make a popular dish from your country • describe what this dish is • explain why it should be included in the event
Daer Luis
I am writing to you to celebrate International Food Day. I am very happy with
this
news. If you visit my country, I will be entertained by the national dishes of Uzbekistan.
We have many world-famous dishes. But I recommend our most hospitable dish
, pilaf. This
dish
is a favourite and familiar dish
of every Uzbek family. Tourists who come to our country always enjoy this
dish
.
I hear that this
event of yours is very little celebrated. Therefore
, I would be happy if you tried our food. S We would be more proud of your favour and introduce our country to the world.
Yours faithfully
FarangizSubmitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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task achievement
Expand on why pilaf should be included in the event by adding more reasons and details.
task achievement
Maintain consistency in tone by revising phrases like 'I hear that this event of yours is very little celebrated.'
coherence cohesion
Improve logical structure by organizing the letter into clearer sections for each point.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a proper greeting and closing, maintaining appropriate formality.
task achievement
The letter clearly offers a dish and provides a description, which addresses part of the task.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.