Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: •explain your travel plans •describe the interesting places you plan to visit •ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

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Dear John, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. I am

weiting

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writing

waiting

this

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letter to inform you that I am planning to come to

USA

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the USA

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to visit you on my vacation. I am telling you

this

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because when I

will be

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there, you can take

leaves

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leave

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from your work

accordingly

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. I will leave my home on Sunday 5th of December, so I can reach there by 6th of December on Monday. And I will

be stay

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with you for a whole week.

Apart from

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this

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, I would like to suggest you some places, so it will

easy

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be easy

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for you to make

plan

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a plan

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Fistly

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First

, I would like to visit

brooklyn

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Brooklyn

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bridge

then

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las vegas

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Las Vegas

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and

disney

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Disney

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land. I only know

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this

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these

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famous places.

Unfortunatelly

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Unfortunately

, I

dont

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don't

know any sightseeing places. If you could help me with

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, it would be great for me. I am very excited to see you after

long

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a long

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time. See you soon. Yours

loveingly

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lovingly

, D

Darshita@8612Tue Oct 29 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion

Work on organizing your ideas more clearly, especially in terms of elaborating and connecting different sections of your letter.

Task Achievement

Try to expand on your travel plans and sightseeing interests. Adding a bit more detail can enhance the overall clarity and engagement of the response.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate and friendly, suitable for a letter to a friend.

Task Achievement

The writing tone is friendly and engaging, making it appropriate for communicative writing.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

158 words

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