Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: •explain your travel plans •describe the interesting places you plan to visit •ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

#friend #country #visit #holidays #•explain #travel #plans #•describe #places #plan #•ask #suggestions #options

Dear John, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am

weiting

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writing

waiting

this

letter to inform you that I am planning to come to

USA

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the USA

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to visit you on my vacation. I am telling you

this

because when I

will be

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there, you can take

leaves

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leave

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from your work

accordingly

. I will leave my home on Sunday 5th of December, so I can reach there by 6th of December on Monday. And I will

be stay

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be staying

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with you for a whole week.

Apart from

this

, I would like to suggest you some places, so it will

easy

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be easy

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for you to make

plan

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a plan

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Fistly

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First

, I would like to visit

brooklyn

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Brooklyn

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bridge

then

las vegas

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Las Vegas

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and

disney

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Disney

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land. I only know

this

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these

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famous places.

Unfortunatelly

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Unfortunately

, I

dont

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don't

know any sightseeing places. If you could help me with

this

, it would be great for me. I am very excited to see you after

long

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a long

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time. See you soon. Yours

loveingly

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lovingly

, D

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Coherence and Cohesion

Work on organizing your ideas more clearly, especially in terms of elaborating and connecting different sections of your letter.

Task Achievement

Try to expand on your travel plans and sightseeing interests. Adding a bit more detail can enhance the overall clarity and engagement of the response.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate and friendly, suitable for a letter to a friend.

Task Achievement

The writing tone is friendly and engaging, making it appropriate for communicative writing.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

158 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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In many counties people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disagvantages?

Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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