Task 1: Supermarket Plan The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The map illustrates the Garlsdon
town
where a plan is made to build a new supermarket.
Overall
, the town
Garlsdon
has several parts. A Change preposition
of Garlsdon
town
centre is there with no traffic zone
covered by an industrial zone
. At both poles of the zone
, housing areas are present. These areas are encircled with a countryside
area
. The two areas initially
considered for the supermarket are the town
centre and the northern-west part
of the map inside the countryside
.
At
the northwest Change preposition
On
part
of the map, there is a railway and a main road which of them have intersect the countryside
. In the middle of the railroad and the main road, the first proposed area
is situated which is somehow 12 kilometres far away from Hindon, an area
with a 10,000 population. Meanwhile, at the town
centre where the second proposed area
is located, there is no traffic zone
but the railway has been going through it towards Cransdon, which is 25 kilometres away from the southeast part
of the countryside
. A main road has also
been branched from the industrial area
and headed towards the southwest part
of the countryside
, 16 kilometres far from the Brandson, another location with 15,000 people.Submitted by jisan.path1506605 on
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