Task 1: Supermarket Plan The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

Task 1: Supermarket Plan

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The map illustrates the Garlsdon
town
where a plan is made to build a new supermarket.
Overall
, the
town
Garlsdon
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has several parts. A
town
centre is there with no traffic
zone
covered by an industrial
zone
. At both poles of the
zone
, housing areas are present. These areas are encircled with a
countryside
area
. The two areas
initially
considered for the supermarket are the
town
centre and the northern-west
part
of the map inside the
countryside
.
At
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the northwest
part
of the map, there is a railway and a main road which of them have intersect the
countryside
. In the middle of the railroad and the main road, the first proposed
area
is situated which is somehow 12 kilometres far away from Hindon, an
area
with a 10,000 population. Meanwhile, at the
town
centre where the second proposed
area
is located, there is no traffic
zone
but the railway has been going through it towards Cransdon, which is 25 kilometres away from the southeast
part
of the
countryside
. A main road has
also
been branched from the industrial
area
and headed towards the southwest
part
of the
countryside
, 16 kilometres far from the Brandson, another location with 15,000 people.
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