In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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number of people
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curious about the history and past
events
of the
buildings
they live. There are various
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justifications
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for
this
such
as gathering
information
about the past
event
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events
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which took place
on
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in
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that
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that building
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buildings
and
peopel
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people
who
live
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there in the past. There are several methods for those seeking these data
such
as
inquaring
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inquiring
from older
neighbors
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neighbours
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and searching on real
states
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state
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documens
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documents
document
. Some people might be
intrested
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interested
to
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in
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finding out data about
events
which happened
on
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in
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their
residental
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residential
area in order to know
weather
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whether
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the building were important
place
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places
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in the past or not. It is believed that if there were any significant
event
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events
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,
this
could add value to their properties.
For example
, the building in Paris which a famous political character of Iran named
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,
lives
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there during the
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Iran
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revelution
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is
valuable
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building now
due to
its significant role in the past.
Furthermore
, some people tend to know about previous residences of their building. It is claimed that if a famous person had lived there, the cost of the house or
buildings
could increase significantly.
For instance
,
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Certain
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certain
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number of houses
belonged
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to some celebrities are more costly and their fans
wanted
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want
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to buy them
in
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at
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higher prices. For those who are
intrested
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interested
in
information
about past
events
, there are various ways, one of them is to
asking
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about the past
events
from older neighbors. They might be aware of some past
events
or
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refer
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to others who are informed.
For instance
, some
nighbors
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neighbours
inharited
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inherited
inhabited
their houses from their grandparents,
therefore
, they can refer individuals to them for more
information
.
Moreover
, they could be aware of
building's
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the building's
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privious
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previous
owners by searching on real
states
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state
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documents. there are many documents in real
states
and other
organization
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organizations
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responsible
to keep
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for keeping
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data about past owners of
buildings
.
Therefore
, it could be possible to research
about
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apply
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past residences. In conclusion,
certain
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a certain
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number of individuals tend to gather
the
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apply
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past
information
about their
buildings
because they might be
intrested
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interested
about
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in
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past activities
on
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in
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that
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those
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places or the identity of the
previos
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previous
owners.
This
could be possible through
inquaring
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inquiring
enquiring
from
nighnors
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neighbours
or other informed sources and searching through real
states
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estate
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documents.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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