Some people think that the only way to improve the safety of our roads is to giving much stricter punishments for driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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safety becomes

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problem for

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and government, with numerous vehicle accidents and mortality. Some people assert that imposing much stricter punishments is the only measurement to guarantee

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safety, but arguably, others contend the indispensability of ethical value promotion and

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advancement. Personally, I observe that everlasting

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security should be maintained by diverse approaches and we cannot only resort

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as the

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straw. It is undeniable that

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of

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punitive

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can restrict the

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behavior

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. Specifically,

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strategy can serve as a post hoc method for warning the possible illegal action.

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, people tend to give in to

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for alcohol or

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, trespassing the sanctity of the law.

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, it can be inferred that it is inadequate to depend on stricter punishment. Beyond punishments, some argue

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of education and technology cannot be

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. Given passive punishment may lose effect, educating the harmful impact

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road

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offenses

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offences

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can

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influence

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improve

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the security system within the vehicle can prevent the potential danger during illegal driving. Based on

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,

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drive

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atmosphere can be fostered and sustained even if some driving

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offences

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occur. In conclusion,

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stricter punishment may mitigate the situation to some extent, the development of friendly driving cannot

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with the absence of technology and education tools. Ultimately,

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safety should be created through the

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from

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, communities, and individuals together.