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What are the important qualities of teachers? Give reasons and examples

A devoting teacher with sufficient experience of teaching at various kinds of high school
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 to teach English as a second language to
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 of all levels. Sophisticated planning and teaching skills
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 diligent and sociable characters with a high level of satisfaction among
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 and
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, selected as one of the top five
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 at school in 2024. Implement team-teaching strategies to enhance the understanding of every student, encouraging their positive participation in learning activities.Organize events and work of PTA, cooperate with parents to enrich children’s learning experience and establish a trusted relationship between
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 and parents. Enhanced
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’ communication skills of English in an interactive way including presentations
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role plays and discussions, promoting their positive learning attitudes.Made school events successful with approximately 94% of positive
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 from
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 and
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. Took leadership in planning and coordinating workshops to analyze
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’ achievement to develop teaching strategies among
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.Tutored
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 who had learning
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 and developmental
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 with step-by-step
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 to ensure their understanding and boost their confidence. Demonstrated high standards of performance including teamwork and communication with
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 in different divisions. Organized timetables and schedules of
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 and
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 so they can study and work systematically. Promoted moral and respectful
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 of children in the classroom. Individualized teaching styles to meet the diverse needs and backgrounds of
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. Support American
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 the basic and intermediate level of understanding of Japanese. Develop the ability to write Japanese characters (hiragana, katakana and kanji) and speak fluently through private learning sessions. Organize an international festival to promote the understanding of Japanese culture.

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coherence cohesion
Ensure the introduction and conclusion are clearly defined to enhance the structure of the essay.
coherence cohesion
Use linking words and phrases to improve the flow of the essay between the paragraphs.
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Provide a complete response by directly linking each point to the importance of teacher qualities.
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Discuss the broader impact of these qualities on students and education to add depth.
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The essay includes specific examples that effectively illustrate the qualities of a teacher.
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You have used real-world examples to reinforce your arguments and demonstrate practical outcomes of teacher qualities.
coherence cohesion
There is a logical progression in the discussion although more transitions would enhance flow.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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