The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. You should write at least 150 words. ау
The two maps illustrate contrasts of a school from 1985 to now.
There was considerable development of the school population over these years and it sequentially changed from a small to a developed school where are built many function blocks.
It is clear that
the principal change is that classroom there a in more now than 1985. In response to technological improvement , library
is Add an article
the library
devided
into two blocks was, Correct your spelling
divided
learning
resources centre and Correct article usage
a learning
computer
room. Correct article usage
a computer
Due to
playing
field reduced and because nearly stand pool and fitness centre. All things considered small place but , more options blocks.
In 1985 there used to be 2 compares, Correct article usage
the playing
Correct article usage
a biger
biger
one. Change the word
bigger
However
, smaller car park
disappeared. In the same Fix the agreement mistake
parks
way
Add a comma
way,
road
Fix the agreement mistake
roads
accept
Correct your spelling
except
to
playing fields disappeared too.Change preposition
for
Lastly
office there was around entrance
Correct article usage
the entrance
stay
the same.Wrong verb form
stayed
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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