The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produceelectricity. Summarise the information byselecting and reporting themain features,andmake comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram simplifies the production of

electricity

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by using geothermal energy.

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, we can divide the whole process into five parts, the first three parts are done underground, and the

last

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two parts are completed on the ground.

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with, the cold

water

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stored in a specific box

pumped

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was pumped

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down underground through

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injection well and reached up to 4.5

kilometers

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kilometres

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deep.

Then

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the cold

water

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flows through a geothermal zone which is filled with hot rocks. After the

water

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is heated, it will pump up back to the ground through the production well, and go into a condenser. To continue with, the hot

water

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is to be condensed into steam and powered by steam. The turbine spins and drives the generator. As soon as the generator is powered, the

electricity

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is produced.

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, the

electricity

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is transmitted to the electric tower. In general, the above is how the geothermal power plant produces

electricity

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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

157 words

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produceelectricity. Summarise the information byselecting and reporting themain features,andmake comparisons where relevant.

In many counties, women and man are working full-time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet.

Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.