The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate alternatives that have happened for the Pacific Railway Station at 2 points in time namely, 1998 and the present.
Overall
, it is important that the number of platforms
and facilities that help people to have a good time increases.
According to
the pictures, the platforms
, at the right of the picture, have the same position as the prior time; additionally
, the new platforms
have been established on the left. In the past, next to the platforms
were toilets, but today, this
place has been altered by the restaurant, and 2 various shops.
The diagrams demonstrate that in the previous, the Cafe, the shop, and the ticket office, which are at the left of the map. Presently, the Cafe and the ticket office, the sectors are bigger, have the same situation as in the past. In addition
, we can see the supermarket, which is at the bottom of the new platforms
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