The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first line
graph
illustrates the percentage of households that own electrical Use synonyms
appliance
Change the noun form
appliances
such
as Washing machines, Refrigerators and Vacuum cleaners in the Linking Words
time
frame 1920 to 2019. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the second line Linking Words
graph
demonstrates the number of hours of housework per week spent per household in one territory in the same Use synonyms
time
frame.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the ownership of electrical appliances grew in the trajectory. Linking Words
However
, the Linking Words
time
spent on housework for each family declined in the same span.
The percentage of households owning washing machines was 40 percent in 1920 and gradually Use synonyms
this
ownership grew to reach 70 until 1960 followed by a decline to hit nearly 60 in 1960. Linking Words
Then
after it progressively grew to attain about 75. Linking Words
While
the rate of families owning Refrigerators had a significant and steady increase to hit 100 Linking Words
percent
in 2000 and there is no data for 2019 for Change the spelling
per cent
this
appliance. Linking Words
Similarly
, vacuum cleaner ownership of families had the same trend Linking Words
to attain
100 percent in 2000 and maintaining Change preposition
of attaining
this
level for 2019.
Linking Words
In contrast
, the second line Linking Words
graph
shows a Use synonyms
graph
, the Use synonyms
time
spent on doing housework moderately declined from 50 hours in 1920 to 10 hours in 2019.Use synonyms
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