IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7.5

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The two maps display alterations that occurred in the town called Westley from 1815 to the present day.
Overall
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, the city witnessed urbanization and industrialisation.
Moreover
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, it lost a lot of green places near
lake
Capitalize word
Lake

The word lake should be capitalized in this context.

show examples
 Lenton. In the north Lowrd Westley's House was demolished and The Red Lion with Lenton Hotel was constructed. In the west of the lake, woods were chopped down and Lenton Housing Estate appeared. In the far west of the town, there was a bridge across the river Twine, which led to London, but it was substituted with a railway. Meanwhile, a Coach Inn in the east of the river was
also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 knocked down and a sports centre and a museum were built.
On the other hand
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, in the middle of the city, a church made its way to a shopping centre. In the south, all houses were turned into business and residential areas,
while
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 a market square and a town hall didn't experience any noticeable changes throughout the years.
Furthermore
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, fields in the southwest were torn down to construct a railway station and a cinema.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • residential areas
  • public facilities
  • road networks
  • railways
  • connectivity
  • housing expansion
  • commercial facilities
  • development
  • modifications
  • shopping centers
  • recreational areas
  • key changes
  • urbanization
  • historical comparison
  • municipal design
What to do next:
Look at other essays: