The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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illustrates

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an industrial neighborhood in the town

Norbiton

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of Norbiton

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and the

future

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elevation for which is planned for

future

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references

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. The

area

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is located alongside a river with limited agricultural places as it is surrounded by only factories.

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,

this

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area

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will be developed in many aspects of the

area

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, from the buildings to the

road

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map itself.

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, It could be seen that the river will have a bridge going over, leading to

a

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big housing.

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, the

road

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will be expanded on the

northern west

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northwest

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of the

circle shaped

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circle-shaped

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road

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leading to another housing.

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that, another

circle shapes

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road

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would be

design

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of

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on

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the south side of the

area

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.

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, there are new agricultural buildings

such

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as shops and the medical centre that will

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the

circle shaped

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circle-shaped

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road

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located in the middle. On the east side of the

area

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, there would be a school and

playgroud

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playground

near a housing district. The factories would

also

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be diminished and changed to housing ranging in size.

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, the development is shown to have a major shift in the purposes and

future

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citizens in the

area

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. Perhaps in the

future

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, the

area

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would

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be more

comforted

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comfortable

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for families with

childrens

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children

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as there will be a school district nearby other than for industrial workers.