The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps
illustrates
an industrial neighborhood in the town Change the verb form
illustrate
Norbiton
and the Change preposition
of Norbiton
future
elevation for which is planned for future
references
.
The Fix the agreement mistake
reference
area
is located alongside a river with limited agricultural places as it is surrounded by only factories. However
, this
area
will be developed in many aspects of the area
, from the buildings to the road
map itself. Firstly
, It could be seen that the river will have a bridge going over, leading to a
big housing. Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, the road
will be expanded on the northern west
of the Correct your spelling
northwest
circle shaped
Add a hyphen
circle-shaped
road
leading to another housing. Besides
that, another circle shapes
Correct your spelling
circle-shaped
road
would be design
Wrong verb form
designed
of
the south side of the Change preposition
on
area
.
In addition
, there are new agricultural buildings such
as shops and the medical centre that will be surrounding
the Wrong verb form
surround
circle shaped
Add a hyphen
circle-shaped
road
located in the middle. On the east side of the area
, there would be a school and playgroud
near a housing district. The factories would Correct your spelling
playground
also
be diminished and changed to housing ranging in size.
To conclude
, the development is shown to have a major shift in the purposes and future
citizens in the area
. Perhaps in the future
, the area
would
be more Wrong verb form
will
comforted
for families with Replace the word
comfortable
childrens
as there will be a school district nearby other than for industrial workers.Correct your spelling
children
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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