The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditure of a children’s charity in the USA in one year.

The pies illustrate how much money spent and receive kid’s charity over 12-month in the America. Looking at
overall
, it is readily apparent that, the amount of revenue and expenditures more or less the same as shown in the graphs. The incoming sources is superior in donated food,
while
the outlays one prevails in program services.
According to
the chart, donated food reported as the dominant revenue accounted for 86%
whereas
the community contributions was nearly 10.4%.
In addition
, program revenue came in third place in profits just over 2%
while
the other resources had a sum of 0.8%. One striking feature is that, the program services lead the way regarding of expenditure items, with 96%.
Then
, just over 3% was used for fundraising (2%) and Management and general (1,6%).
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