The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.

The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of male and female
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in one of the bibliotheca at Starmouth School over a four yearperiod. One striking feature is that, it seems sharply increase at
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by girl,
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the boy
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firstly
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was slightly increase and
at the end
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it took drop during the given time
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. At the beginning of the
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, boys had the largest
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of bibliography read with just over 50 examples. It continued to grow until it reach a peak in 2011 at approximately with 100 books,
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the
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of male
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slightly declined. The
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of both male and female
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was nearly 100 in 2011.
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, the the quantity of lady
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has a significant upward climbing throughout the
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and
this
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trend reached 140 reading samples
at the end
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of the time frame. It is notable that by 2012, female
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surpassed male
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in
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words readers, period, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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