The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.
The line graph illustrates the amount of male and female
readers
in one of the bibliotheca at Starmouth School over a four yearperiod.
One striking feature is that, it seems sharply increase at readers
by girl, while
the boy readers
firstly
was slightly increase and at the end
it took drop during the given time period
.
At the beginning of the period
, boys had the largest number
of bibliography read with just over 50 examples. It continued to grow until it reach a peak in 2011 at approximately with 100 books, while
from this
period
the number
of male readers
slightly declined. The number
of both male and female readers
was nearly 100 in 2011.
In contrast
, the the quantity of lady readers
has a significant upward climbing throughout the period
and this
trend reached 140 reading samples at the end
of the time frame. It is notable that by 2012, female readers
surpassed male readers
in number
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