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The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph depicts the amount of automobiles manufactured in Argentina,
Australia
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 and
Thailand
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 between 2003 and 2009.
Overall
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, the number of cars manufactured in Argentina started at the highest level and witnessed a downward trend throughout the whole period, being at the
last
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 position,
however
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,
Australia
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 almost trebled, becoming the most car producer.
Likewise
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,
Thailand
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 had a sharp growth from beginning till the end.
To begin
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 with, Argentina produced the maximum amount, accounting for 400 automobiles in 2003,
while
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 in 2 years it decreased 2 times, levelling off at 200. In 2009 it followed the same pattern as the previous one, dropped remarkably to 100 cars and positioned the
last
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.
On the other hand
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,
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 produced approximately two times more cars than
Thailand
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, standing at 300 and 161 respectively in the first year. Surprisingly, in 2005,
Thailand
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 surpassed
Australia
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 with 200 vehicles,
nevertheless
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Australia
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 generated 120 more vehicles and dominated over others, reaching to 1119 and 999 in order at the final stage.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, thailand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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