The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the participation in various sports which happens in specific
area
in1997 and 2017. There were 7 sports Fix the agreement mistake
areas
like
(Tennis, basketball, cricket, golf, swimming, football and Rugby) in the bar chart where the participants Change preposition
apply
play
Wrong verb form
played
in
different Change preposition
at
time
.
Among all the sports, tennis was the Fix the agreement mistake
times
highly
participated game in both Rephrase
most
year
among adults which Change to a plural noun
years
is
50,000 in 1997 and 55,000 in 2017 Wrong verb form
was
comapred
to basketball which was played less around 8000 Correct your spelling
compared
people
attended in 1997 and 22,000 Use synonyms
people
in 2017.
Cricket was played more in 1997 which presents that approximately Use synonyms
avobe
25,000 Verb problem
apply
people
played Use synonyms
this
game but there is a drastic decline shown in 2017 which is below 10,000. Linking Words
On the other hand
, Linking Words
Foodball
has seen a significant increase in 2017 than 1997. In 2017, grown up over 40,000 Correct your spelling
Football
people
attended Use synonyms
in
football play. Change preposition
apply
Similar
case is seen in Add an article
A similar
Rugby
game; Correct article usage
the Rugby
people
got more interested in 2017.
Golf and Swimming Use synonyms
has
not changed much in these years. There were above 30,000 Change the verb form
have
people
who played in both games in Use synonyms
this
time span.Linking Words
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