The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the variation in different clothing exports from three countries
such
as Myanmar, Cambodia and Japan in
1999 to 2003 . The units are measured in millions of Change preposition
from
dollar
.
In 1993, Myanmar Fix the agreement mistake
dollars
has seen
Wrong verb form
saw
a
Change the article
an
expotential
increase in Correct your spelling
exponential
export
which Fix the agreement mistake
exports
is
800 Wrong verb form
was
million
dollar
and it Change to a plural noun
dollars
continues
to rise in 2001 which reached above 900 Wrong verb form
continued
million
. But suddenly it plunged to below 400 million
in 2002. After that
there is a slight increase which is above 400million in 2003.
Japan has seen a substantial decrease in the year 2000 than 1999 from 600million to 500million. Add a comma
that,
Then
it has
experienced an increase in 2001 which Unnecessary verb
apply
is
Wrong verb form
was
600million
, but after Correct your spelling
600 million
that
it levelled off in 2003 which Add a comma
that,
has
reached below Unnecessary verb
apply
500million
.
Cambodia has experienced an upward trend from 1999 to 2022 which is from 450 Correct your spelling
500 million
million
to 700 million
then
it slightly dripped off and reached at 600million in 2003.Submitted by raisasd on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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