The diagram below shows how electricity in generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The diagram below shows how electricity in generated in a hydroelectric power station.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how electricity in generated in a hydroelectric power station.
The picture illustrates the generation of
electricity
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through a hydroelectric power station.
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, certain directions of river
water
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’s flow are used to make
electricity
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. If we look at the details, river
water
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is stored in a high-level reservoir behind a dam. The entrance of the dam is opened
in
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during
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the days
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days
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day
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and closed at
nights
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night
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. To generate the
electricity
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, the
water
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flow should be downward to enter the power station, which has a generator.
In
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this
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point,
water
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comes to reversible turbines that operate
generator
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a generator
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in
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during
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day
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the day
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by a connection. Power lines which are attached to the generator, transfer the
electricity
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to
national
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the national
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grid and
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it can be used in apartments or industries. The excessive
water
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from the process will be stored in a low-level reservoir. At
nights
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night
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, the turbines would take back
water
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from the low-level source and pump it to the high-level one.
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, it would not enter the dam as the entrance is closed at
nights
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.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Reservoir
  • Penstock
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Transformer
  • High voltage
  • Renewable energy
  • Kinetic energy
  • Potential energy
  • Power grid
  • Sustainable
  • Flow rate
  • Energy conversion
  • Hydraulic pressure
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