The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The diagram depicts the procedure
of
producing a special type of biofuel which is mentioned as Change preposition
for
ethanol
.
The process is all about making Use synonyms
ethanol
, a biofuel, which can be used in the transport industry. From the harvesting of the plant to the microbial digestion, there are certain procedures which have to be followed in order to obtain Use synonyms
ethanol
.
the process gets started with the plantation and growing of Use synonyms
trees
that use sunlight and carbon dioxide to generate energy which gets deposited inside plants. Use synonyms
Then
, the harvesting part ensures the collection of the Linking Words
trees
and Use synonyms
trees
are Use synonyms
then
sent to a pre-processing unit to make cellulose from the extracted parts of the Linking Words
trees
.
Moving on, the cellulose is Use synonyms
then
transferred to a processing zone where it is turned into sugar with the help of different types of chemical reactions. Linking Words
Furthermore
, microbes are added with sugar to conduct fermentation from which the Linking Words
ethanol
is expected to be produced. Use synonyms
This
reaction allows sugar to convert into Linking Words
ethanol
, which in fact, is a form of alcohol.
Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
ethanol
is used as fuel for many vehicle engines and machinery including cars, trucks and Use synonyms
airplanes
. Change the spelling
aeroplanes
This
biofuel is converted into energy which allows these machineries to be active and carbon dioxide is produced from Linking Words
this
reaction as a by-product. Linking Words
This
carbon dioxide, Linking Words
however
, gets released into the environment and is used by the Linking Words
trees
again to make energy with the help of sunlight.Use synonyms
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