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people
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that
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governmentAdd a verb
government is
government was
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responsible for the
of public transport. In
this
I will explain two reasons why I agree
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this
statement.
On the one hand, free public
transports
have many advantages for
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society so the government should allocate their budget to it.
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benefit of public
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is that it
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to reduce traffic in important parts of the city.
As a result
, it would reduce the time needed to travel from one place to another and it could help
people
to allocate their time better.
Secondly
, electric trains could decrease the carbon footprint
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also
leadChange the verb form
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to better air and
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.
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lastly
, by using free buses or trains,
people
doesChange the verb form
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not need to spend their money to buy a car or motorcycle so they
couldWrong verb form
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spend it
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another mattersReplace the adjective
another matter
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.
Thus
, it is important for the authority to make free public
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as it could raise
peopleChange noun form
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willingness to use it.
On the other hand
, mass
transportsFix the agreement mistake
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built by a private
company
might lead to a big problem. The lack of regulation will leave the
company
to set the price as they please without the
of giving sufficient security and good facility.
For example
, once in my hometown in Indonesia, there was a public transport operated by
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company
called 'Angkot', a modified car enough for 10 to 12 passengers and
serveWrong verb form
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short trips. It has
pricingCorrect article usage
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problem that keeps on
raisingCorrect your spelling
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.
Besides
, there are no serious
solutionFix the agreement mistake
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to solve its
thievesChange noun form
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problem as the
company
and the authority didn't care much.
To sum up
, public transportations have economic and
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benefits for society. It
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also
need full support from the regulator as being controlled by private sectors is not favourable.