It is true that nowadays young people experience more stress in schools and society and from commercials.
This
essay will discuss the major causes of
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in
environments,
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with others and they see
that
them to buy new products.
This
essay will
also
suggest solutions to these problems
such
as schools
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on real
instead
of just
high
,
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that comparing with others
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to stress and
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should take
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regarding
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advertisements that
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children
.
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most
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children
try to be more successful in academic areas. They need to get high band scores because it
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their future to
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in a good
.
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score and 20% would be the high school results. Another problem is that people
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social media share their top moments and they rarely post sad memories.
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example
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Instagram mostly post their meals at expensive restaurants.
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industry
due to
earn more benefits fond it easy to work on
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. so they focus
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commercial video clips to influence
.
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we can see that
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produces mobiles named "Yungi".
To
these issues schools should use schemes that encourage
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to get deep
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because
this
method
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them to get a better job.
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example
in
companies hire
with
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not good grades in academic fields. To
immense comparison with other
we need
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this
from childhood to
children
so
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don't have
such
challenges in adulthood.
GovernmentCorrect article usage
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should implement policies that limit
that aim
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just to earn money and don't have some benefits for themselves.
In
in
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our
have a lot of pressures from
sources.
This
essay discussed some
of these
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also
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their solutions .