The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows how
glass
can be recycled, with the process being circular and consisting of six main stages.
Overall
, we can observe there is no limit on the amount of times glass
can be recycled and reused, as long as consumers are willing to take the initial step of separating glass
trash from other household waste.
Firstly
, old glass
bottles should be separated from general household garbage and placed in recycling bins. These bins are gathered by a refuse truck, which transports them to a processing plant.
At the plant, the initial step is to wash and disinfect the used glass
in a special equipment
. Remove the article
special equipment
a piece of special equipment
After
this
step, the clean bottles are transferred to a second machine where they are crushed and melted down. The molten glass
is then
reshaped into new glass
products using a moulding equipment
. These new bottles can be filled and sent to supermarkets for sale, allowing the process Remove the article
moulding equipment
a piece of moulding equipment
to begin
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