The map below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps provide information about the current layout and

upcoming

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the upcoming

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proposal of

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slip

Islip

lslip

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the lslip

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center

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centre

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is elucidated by given maps

Overall

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, by having a cursory glance

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map

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the map

a map

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, it can be clearly seen that

their

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there

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are various

modification

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modifications

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and urbanization in which the introduction of

car

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the car

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park

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parks

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and bus

station

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stations

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are

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the most significant developments.

Acoording

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According

to the maps , the area has gradually changed and a lot of

building

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buildings

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will be modified .

Whole

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The whole

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center

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centre

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will be surrounded by

dual

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a dual

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carriageway and the main road

demolish

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demolished

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Moreover

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, the shops that

locate

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are located

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north

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the north

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and south of

main

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the main

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road will

merged

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merge

be merged

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and become one big

shop

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shopping

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center . Another striking Chang

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is a

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lot of new houses

wil

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will

built

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be built

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and pedestrians will be

constructe

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constructed

Also

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new

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a new

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car park and bus station will be built in

north

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the north

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diraction

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direction

and

besid

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beside

the new housing . The good and important thing school and park

locate

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located

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the same place without no Chang .

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
33
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

161 words

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The map below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. 1. Why is this the case? What can be done solve this problem?

Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays,most of the information is available on the internet, whereas in the past, knowledge was stored in books and on paper. Do you think that advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage