The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The given visual illustrates information about manufacturing instant
noodles
in a factory by using industrial machinery.
Overall
,
this
process has done in eight steps which are storage silos, mixer,
dough
sheets,
dough
strips,
noodles
discs, cooking and drying, vegetables and spices and the
last
one which is labelling and sealing. Once flour is transferred in storage silos are mixed with water and oil in crasher. In the next sage
dough
is put in the sheets by using rollers and
then
is placed in
dough
strips. Having been set in
noodles
discs and cooking with oil and drying
noodles
happened in two stages. When
noodles
are placed in cups, spices and vegetables are added to them and labelling is done. Now the process is done and
noodles
reach the end users. In
a
Correct article usage
apply
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conclusion,
noodles
that are instant manufacturing are made with flour, oil, water, vegetables and spices that are the main ingredient.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • mixing ingredients
  • dough preparation
  • sheeting
  • steaming
  • cutting techniques
  • dehydration
  • deep-frying
  • cooling system
  • packaging
  • quality control
  • production line
  • mass production
  • food preservation
  • convenience food
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