Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course. You should write at least 80 words. Allow yourself 15 minutes for this task.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter regarding
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the
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Tertiary Education certificate
course
. I
was see
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one of your
adverticement
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advertisement
advertisements
from
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on
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Tertiary
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the Tertiary
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education
facebook
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page on 1st
augest
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august
2024.
your
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You
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called all part of
vacational
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vocational
certificate
course
. for
examble
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example
; electrical,
carpentary
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carpentry
,
cookary
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cookery
,
pulaming
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plumbing
playing
.. but I did not see
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an Information
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Technology
course
in
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on
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this
site.
Moreover
, I have to know about the Information
Technology
course
reason for I have finished
batcholor
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bachelor
of
businuss
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business
Management
course
in our
counry
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country
country's
top university. now I have
iedia
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media
to move to
abroat
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abroad
about
next year. I did not follow any Information
Technology
course
yet. my company expect one of
Informtion
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Information
Technology
course
certificate
course
for my vacancy purpose.
Lastly
, could I know about in
this
coures
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course
has in your institute? if you have
this
course
and
course
details
pleace informe
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please inform
about
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me about
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my
persional
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personal
address or my
gamail
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email
Gmail
mail
address. I am going to expect your reply soon.
Youre
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Yours
You're
Faithfully. Joon
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The letter has a clear purpose and request for information about the course.
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You've used a formal tone appropriate for a letter to an information officer.

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