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Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course. You should write at least 80 words. Allow yourself 15 minutes for this task.

#information #officer #tape #office #preparation #certificate #background #course #minutes
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter regarding
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Tertiary Education certificate
course
. I
was see
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 one of your
adverticement
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advertisement
advertisements
from
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on
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Tertiary
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the Tertiary
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 education
facebook
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 page on 1st
augest
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august
 2024.
your
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You
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 called all part of
vacational
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vocational
 certificate
course
. for
examble
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example
; electrical,
carpentary
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carpentry
,
cookary
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cookery
,
pulaming
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plumbing
playing
.. but I did not see
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an Information
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Technology
course
in
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on
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this
 site.
Moreover
, I have to know about the Information
Technology
course
 reason for I have finished
batcholor
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bachelor
 of
businuss
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business
 Management
course
 in our
counry
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country
country's
 top university. now I have
iedia
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media
 to move to
abroat
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abroad
about
 next year. I did not follow any Information
Technology
course
 yet. my company expect one of
Informtion
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Information
Technology
course
 certificate
course
 for my vacancy purpose.
Lastly
, could I know about in
this
coures
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course
 has in your institute? if you have
this
course
 and
course
 details
pleace informe
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please inform
about
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me about
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 my
persional
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personal
 address or my
gamail
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email
Gmail
mail
 address. I am going to expect your reply soon.
Youre
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Yours
You're
 Faithfully. Joon
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph logically follows the previous one.
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The letter has a clear purpose and request for information about the course.
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You've used a formal tone appropriate for a letter to an information officer.
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