Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course. You should write at least 80 words. Allow yourself 15 minutes for this task.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter regarding

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the

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Tertiary Education certificate

course

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. I

was see

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saw

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one of your

adverticement

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advertisements

from

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Tertiary

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the Tertiary

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education

facebook

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Facebook

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page on 1st

augest

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august

2024.

your

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You

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called all part of

vacational

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vocational

certificate

course

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. for

examble

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example

; electrical,

carpentary

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carpentry

cookary

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cookery

pulaming

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plumbing

playing

.. but I did not see

Information

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an Information

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Technology

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course

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this

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site.

Moreover

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, I have to know about the Information

Technology

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course

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reason for I have finished

batcholor

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bachelor

businuss

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business

Management

course

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in our

counry

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country

country's

top university. now I have

iedia

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media

to move to

abroat

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abroad

about

next year. I did not follow any Information

Technology

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course

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yet. my company expect one of

Informtion

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Information

Technology

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course

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certificate

course

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for my vacancy purpose.

Lastly

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, could I know about in

this

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coures

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course

has in your institute? if you have

this

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course

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and

course

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details

pleace informe

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please inform

about

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me about

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persional

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personal

address or my

gamail

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Gmail

mail

address. I am going to expect your reply soon.

Youre

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Yours

You're

Faithfully. Joon

Thu Oct 31 2024

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coherence cohesion

Try to organize your paragraphs better, each focusing on a single idea.

task achievement

Make sure to check spelling and grammar to enhance clarity.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph logically follows the previous one.

task achievement

The letter has a clear purpose and request for information about the course.

task achievement

You've used a formal tone appropriate for a letter to an information officer.

3
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

152 words

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