The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the immigrant
people
from village to city areas divided into three countries and forecasts for 2025.
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Overall
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a glance
glance
there were three countries Add a comma
glance,
that
the population movement from rural to urban, it can be seen that Indonesia was the lowest country that Correct word choice
where
people
immigrated and forecasted remain stable, Use synonyms
while
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was
the highest countries that Change the verb form
were
people
immigrated and predicted increase in the end of period.
In 2000, the Use synonyms
Iran
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Iran's
populations
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population
around
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was around
below
10 Change preposition
apply
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millions
, and Change to singular
million
then
slowly increased in 2005 Linking Words
around
10 Change preposition
to around
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millions
, and Change to singular
million
significant
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significantly
rised
around below Correct your spelling
rise
raised
rises
than
40 Correct word choice
apply
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millions
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million
besides
that Linking Words
its
predicted still increase Correct your spelling
is
until
2025 Change preposition
by
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to around
around
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to
morethan
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more than
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millions
and Change to singular
million
exceeded
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exceed
Russia
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Russian
people
. Meanwhile, Russia overtakes in 2000 around more than 10 Use synonyms
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millions
, Change to singular
million
besides
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significant
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a significant
increased
until 2015 and predicted still increase Replace the word
increase
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period
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the period
about
under 90 Change preposition
by about
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millions
.
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million
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, around 10 Linking Words
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millions
Indonesian Change to singular
million
people
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moving
from rural to urban in 2000, and still increased Wrong verb form
moved
until
2020 about 30 Change preposition
to
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millions
, and predicted still remain stable in 2025.Change to singular
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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