You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart illustrates the immigrant

people

from village to city areas divided into three countries and forecasts for 2025.

Overall

, at

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a glance

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glance

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there were three countries

that

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where

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the population movement from rural to urban, it can be seen that Indonesia was the lowest country that

people

immigrated and forecasted remain stable,

while

Russia and Iran

was

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the highest countries that

people

immigrated and predicted increase in the end of period. In 2000, the

Iran

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populations

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population

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around

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was around

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below

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apply

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millions

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million

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, and

then

slowly increased in 2005

around

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to around

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millions

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million

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, and

significant

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significantly

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rised

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rise

raised

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around below

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apply

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millions

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million

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besides

that

its

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predicted still increase

until

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2025

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to around

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around

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morethan

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more than

millions

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million

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and

exceeded

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Russia

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people

. Meanwhile, Russia overtakes in 2000 around more than 10

millions

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million

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besides

significant

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a significant

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increased

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until 2015 and predicted still increase

at the end

period

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about

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under 90

millions

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million

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, around 10

millions

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million

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Indonesian

people

moving

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moved

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from rural to urban in 2000, and still increased

until

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2020 about 30

millions

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, and predicted still remain stable in 2025.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "besides".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, millions with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 6 times.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
33Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

172 words

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In many countries goverment are investing new technology to deal with the public. Why this is happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of goverment money?

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