A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntarylunpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntarylunpaid work, in your letter explain why you want to do voluntarylunpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I am willing to do an unpaid
intership
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internship
in your museum. I am a student at
National
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School
Drama
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of Drama
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studying Cinematography and my tutor has asked me to submit a detailed report on
Practical
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Application of Cinematography and its History.
Therefore
,
this
job will enable me to complete my
task
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along with
practical learning. As I have explained
that
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I am doing a course in Cinematography,
hence
, I can work behind the camera
along with
other crew in recording plays and interviews that
museum
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the museum
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conduct
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. Adding more to it, I am good at
editting
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editing
videos because I have taken it up as an extra subject and I have
a
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practical experience of doing it in college events. My Summer holidays will commence in June till
mid July
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,
therefore
, I will be able to join you from 2 June till 10 July, because I
also
need a few spare days to compile my task work and make a detailed report of it before submission. I hope you will give me an opportunity to serve you and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.
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Ensure that any small typographical errors are corrected, such as 'unpaid intership' which should be 'unpaid internship.'
coherence cohesion
You may wish to divide your ideas into separate paragraphs to enhance clarity and provide a smoother flow.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately formal and polite.
task achievement
The writing tone is suitable for an application letter, showing enthusiasm and clarity in intent.
task achievement
Clear and concise task response, with relevant information provided for availability, skills, and reasons for wanting the position.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • part-time
  • voluntary/unpaid work
  • museum
  • apply
  • director
  • skills
  • qualities
  • availability
  • interest
  • opportunity
  • passion
  • contribution
  • community
  • exhibit
  • knowledge
  • communication
  • organizational
  • time management
  • flexible
  • dedicated
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