The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compsrisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compsrisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of attendees for various activities at an Australian social centre in Melbourn in a twenty-year period (2000 to 2020).
It is clear that
the film club was always the most favourable choice. The number of people who chose amateur dramatics fell over time to make it the least popular activity
at the end
of the period shown. As can be seen, the film club had always been chosen by most applicants,
although
the quantity did not change significantly (about 65). Table tennis which was chosen by 15 participants, raised in popularity with a dramatic increase from 2010 to 2020, reaching a peak at well above 50 in the
last
year shown. The same pattern happened to musical performances getting to a rise of almost 20 participants, it was not chosen by anybody from 2000 to 2005, though. The number for martial arts fluctuated and remained stable from the beginning to the end of the time course (almost 35). People lost interest in amateur dramatics which was selected by 25 and less than 10 people at the beginning and
last
of the period in respective order, making it the least popular activity in 2020.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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