The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the scores of three different teams in four various
seasons
. This
includes the data from 2002 to 2005.
Overall
, it is evident that Team
B got the highest scores in four different seasons
. However
, the lowest recorded were from Team
A in the first 2 years
and Team
C in last
Correct article usage
the last
years
of the study.
In detail, in 2002, it was Team
B who got the highest score
of 82 points
amongst the remaining teams. Moreover
, in the following year, their score
decreased by 22 points
. Two years
after the initial year, their score
almost declined by half at
43 Change preposition
to
points
. However
, in 2005 it went up to 55 points
.
Team
A on the other hand
started with its lowest score
over the four seasons
at 5 points
. In the next season, it rose to 11 points
and in 2004, it inclined
more than thrice its number in 2003. Verb problem
increased
Although
, in the last
season it dive
down to its lowest at 8 Change the verb form
dives
points
.
Finally
, Team
C started with 10 points
in the first year and increased by 5 point
in 2003. In the Change to a plural noun
points
last
two years
of the seasons
, it went down to 12 points
and eventually 5 points
in the last
season which was equal to Team
A's first score
in 2002.Submitted by cng123 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words seasons, team, years, score, points with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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