The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in canada and australia.
The pie charts represent with of accessing the news in Two countries 3
named
Canada and Australia
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apply
Overall
. While
most of
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apply
canadian
people Change the capitalization
Canadian
accessed
through Wrong verb form
access
Tv
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TV
however
Australian people accessed
online. Wrong verb form
access
In contrast
both of
countries least used category not specified.
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apply
To begin
with
the largest category in Canada was TV at Add a comma
with,
fourty
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forty
four
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
however
the smallest one was not specifiedAdd a comma
however,
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at
percent
. People who accessed the news online were 36 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. The indexes of categories named print were 14 and sevenChange the spelling
per cent
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per cent
percent
respectively. Regarding to
Australia the largest category was online at 52 Remove the preposition
apply
precent
.Correct your spelling
per cent
Whereas
smallest
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the smallest
were
Radio and weren't specified at just Change the verb form
was
same
levelCorrect article usage
the same
2
%.Persons who Change preposition
of 2
get
received the news TV were just 37 Verb problem
apply
precent
. Correct your spelling
per cent
Then
the figure of
print was just 7 Change preposition
for
precent
.Correct your spelling
per cent
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