The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
The given graph provides data from a 2008 report about
the
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usage in the United States of America since 1980 with predictions until 2030. Correct your spelling
energy
Overall
, as can be seen, Petrol
and Oil
has
the most consumption . Change the verb form
have
Also
, all of them have a
upward Change the article
an
trend
except for Hydropower
.
Looking more closely at the trend
, it is clear that
from 1980 until 1985, Hydropower
, Solar/Wind
, Nuclear, and Coal had a gradual rise while
Natural Gas
and Petrol
and Oil
decreased gradualy
and reached Correct your spelling
gradually
to
their trough. Between 1985 and 1990, all of them rocketed. After that, Solar/Change preposition
apply
Wind
and Petrol
and Oil
declined however
Hydropower
, Nuclear, and Coal grown
followed their growth and Natural Replace the word
growth
Gas
stood
stable.
Verb problem
remained
Although
, Hydropower
had a deramatic
decline in 2000, the trends of Correct your spelling
dramatic
Petrol
and Oil
, Natural Gas
, Nuclear, and Solar/Wind
show that a minimal rise happend
. The Correct your spelling
happened
trend
of Coal and Solar/Wind
reveal
that they will have a steady pattern in 2010. Natural Change the verb form
reveals
Gas
, Coal, and
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Petrol
and Oil
will have a gentle increase and others will have a period of stability until 2025. The Solar/Wind
and Nuclear will have experienced a sharp peak, however
, the rest will have followed their previous trend
by 2030.
In summary, Hydropower
will have had the lowest use by 2030.Submitted by benyaminzademoradian1378 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words petrol, oil, trend, hydropower, wind, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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